[ Why yes, yes they do. Maybe not so obviously before, but she is definitely going to be able to hear the louder clinks now and even feel the way the blade glances off the side of his fingers.
Bits of the glove fabric have been torn to shreds, and chunks are coming off of it entirely, revealing the shiny silver underneath. ]
Ooh, not bad! Could still use some improvement, though--you definitely missed some spaces in between.
[ He holds up his hand as proof and wiggles the fingers where the glove faced the most damage. ]
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Bits of the glove fabric have been torn to shreds, and chunks are coming off of it entirely, revealing the shiny silver underneath. ]
Ooh, not bad! Could still use some improvement, though--you definitely missed some spaces in between.
[ He holds up his hand as proof and wiggles the fingers where the glove faced the most damage. ]